Selasa, 19 April 2016

Making a Narrative Text!

The Boy and The Fountain of Youth
By Yudha Adi Pratama

On a big rock near a small karst lake, a boy with white shirt and grey trousers stood there like a hero who just conquered another enemy territories. He rested his two fists on a square shaped log like he was resting on his beloved longsword. His black hair waved as the wind blew from the upper hill.

“We found it guys, another karst lake!” said the boy.

“Looks like, it’s not just a lot amount of water trapped in a karst. It is a water spring!” said a tall boy with a black shirt from behind.

“You think so? Let’s check it out then!” said the boy with the white shirt.

“But... watch out guys. Even though there is less moss on this place, it still can be slippery you know!” said a white-skinned boy with a grey shirt.

“Who cares? Actually, I want to jump down into that blue water! But, *sigh* I don’t bring any spare underwear.”            

“Seriously?” asked the white-skinned boy.

“Hahaha, nevermind, let’s get a better view of this lake. C’mon!” said the boy with the white shirt.
            
With enthusiasmn, the boy with the white shirt jumped and ran through some limestones and wet soil. Sometimes he needs to walk carefully through moss invested ground and some wet limestone pieces that could hurt his feet and make him fall. Then he climbed to the higher ground to see the clear blue water from above.
            
“Hey! Slowpoke! Over here!” shouted the boy while waving his hand.
            
“We’re coming!” replied the white-skinned boy.
            
“Geez, even though he knows that the lake is actually a manmade.”
            
“Maybe he is just excited to find a different karst lake than the last one. I am surprised that this one is actually a water spring.” said the tall boy.
            
The two walked to where the boy with the white shirt was but he have already jumped down onto a big karst stone where the water emerged from the crack above him. He tried to fill his fists with the water then drank it a little.
            
“Yuck...” said the boy.
            
When the boy tossed the remaining water on his hand, he saw a red orb as big as a golf ball glowing in the forest. The orb flew slowly to the trees then it disappeared in the dark. The boy knew that it was a sign for him that the hill was hiding something.
           
“I wonder what the orb tries to show me.” said the boy to himself.

“Febri! Did you drink the strange looking water again?” asked the white-skinned boy.
            
“Yea, a bit, but it is kinda bitter! Want to try it?” replied Febri as he tried to take some water again.
            
“No! Get it off! It is not even hygiene!” yelled the white-skinned boy.
            
“Here! Just a sip! You should taste the bittersweet of life!”
            
“Stop it Febri. Of course, it has a bitter taste, it emerges from a limestone, you silly!” said the tall boy.
            
The three of them then laughed. The three is actually a good friends since they met in the beginning of their middle school, but Febri still kept many things from his friends. From the red orb that he saw and the fact that he was gifted. Yes, Febri had the sixth sense with him and the reason why he explored the hill is because the feeling that he got.
            
After some chit chats and photos were taken as souvenirs, the three headed home.
            
“I think I want to do the birdwatching, you guys can go home without me.” said Febri.

“What? On the usual place?” asked the tall boy.

“Yeah, you know, I need a private time for myself as always.” said Febri.

“Okay, go ahead, we will be waiting on my house.”

“Make sure to come back before evening, okay?” said the white-skinned boy.

“Sure, see ya guys!”
            
Febri ran to the upper hill, where the trees are more crowded and the bird sang louder. To get to the birdwatching spot wasn’t an easy job, he needed to climb some roots and walked on a lot of slippery giant stones. In case he should explore another untouched part of the hill, the boy then tried to save his energy by walking and carefully search for the marked trees. He should be on the birdwatching spot now but he still wandering around for fifteen minutes even after he followed the marked trees. Without even noticing, he came to the dark part of the forest, where the sunrays scarcely could touch the ground and the moss was thicker. He knew that he have been tricked!
            
“Kiki, why you did this to me?” said the boy gently.

“To make you lost of course! *giggles*”
           
A white orb suddenly appeared from behind a tree that has an arrow sign. It flew close to Febri then turned into a shape of 10-years-old girl wearing a white one piece skirt. Her mid back length white hair waved after she shook her head a bit. Then her black irises focused on Febri appearance.
           
“I never marked a tree like that, it could hurt them.” said Febri.

“Then why are you following them?” asked the spirit.

“I just wondering, do you happen to know about a red orb around here?”

“No. But I suggest you not to follow them!” replied Kiki while walking on rocks.

“Why?” asked Febri as he followed Kiki. The two then walked deeper into the forest.

“Because making you lost is my duty. I don’t want your soul to be taken away by someone else!”

“So, are they bad?” asked Febri.

“I think they’re just confused for a hundred years after their master passed away.”

“I don’t understand. Then what are they trying to show me?”

“I don’t know. It is not my business.” replied the girl curtly.

“Please tell me, Kiki. I will give you something in exchange.” said Febri then he took out some Tuberose flowers from his backpack.

“Where did you get that? There isn’t such a flower on the meadow!”

“Of course! I picked these flowers near my house. Hahaha! Now, tell me about the red orb!” said the boy then he tempted Kiki with the flowers that he brought.
            
The girl took the Tuberose from the boy’s hand by force. She smiled for a while then suddenly disappeared, leaving only smoke on where she stood before. For a short term after that, somehow the boy could hear the trees whispered something with a strange language.
            
“Follow me!”
            
A strange wind suddenly blew inside the forest, it made some short branches pointing to a direction. Without any doubt, the boy ran to where the branches were pointing at. It took him down the hill, to the unexplored area. Unfortunately, after avoiding a lot of obstacles in order to catch the wind, he felt down a few meters to the ground.
            
*SRAAAAAAKK*
*CRASH!*
            
“Aw! Darn it... Looks like I sprained my ankle!” said Febri with a low voice. It seemed to be a not serious sprains so Febri tried to strech his legs and casted a cloth on the sprained area.
            
The wind have brought him to somekind of a nearly-collapsed cave. A giant tree behind it seemed to be the cause why the cave was almost collapsed. Its roots were stabbing the cave from above. The surrounding was not as dark as before but it had a heavy and dark aura.
            
“What the...? It is a breadfruit tree and it’s insanely huge.”
            
With his injured leg, Febri tried to enter the cave slowly. He saw from afar a faintly glowing red light. It is the red orb, but before he could after it, a girl voice resonated in his head.
            
“Once you step into the cave, I can’t guarantee you to come back alive! What lies inside the cave is your destiny, so it is you who can decide!”
            
“Thanks Kiki, be sure to tell my friends if I didn’t come back before dawn, ‘kay?” whispered the boy.
            
“What?! Am I your slave or something?! Look silly boy, I am a thousand years older than you! Don’t think you can ordered me like that without paying me with something!” yelled the voice. As you can imagine, having a weird voice inside your head is quite an unpleasent experience, then how about having the voice yelled inside your head?
            
“Alright, alright, I will plant some Tuberose seeds near the meadow after I come back. Happy?” calmed the boy.
            
“Do you promise?” asked the voice.
            
“Sure! I promise!” replied the boy.
            
Then suddenly a little girl walked on the cliff where the boy slipped before. She waved her little hand then ran back into the woods. Febri himself continued his journey into the cave as he followed the red orb. Slowly but surely, the cave lost its only light from outside. Only the darkness and the sound of footsteps were left in the cave. Sometimes, Febri could hear some weird whispering sound near him but eventually he could calmed himself after recited some prayers.
            
The whispering sound finally disappered, but now he couldn’t see a thing. The red orb has gone too far in front of him. The last thing the boy could remember was when the red orb tilted his way to the left. It meant that there was an intersection in front of him. Febri calmed himself again, trying to figure out which passage should he choose.
            
*tluck...tlock*
            
A water drops! The boy was sure that the last sound he heard was a sound of water drops. He followed straight to the sound and it leaded to a blue light that the boy could see it from afar. The boy was somehow happy, he knew that he was leading to the right way. So he rushed to the blue light until he felt down because he stumbled a giant root. The boy was angry and wanted to say a curse word, but he tried to calmed himself as always then woke up and started to walk again. Finally, Febri could reach the place where the glowing blue light came.
            
The boy couldn’t believe with what he saw right now. It was a place with a lot of gaint rock and there was some kind of pool in the middle of it. The rock itself covered with glowing moss and the others were seemed to contain a light crystal inside it. There were also some weird plants who could emit purple or blue light from its body. That’s why the place was emiting a blue light from afar.
            
The boy finally dropped on his feet, he was stunned by the beauty of such a magical place like this. Then the boy tried to see the pool. The pool itselft had a clear water, so he could barely see the bottom of the pool. Suddenly the urge came! The urge to drink that fresh-looking water that probably came out from an underground river.
            
“Ah, it is been a long time since the last guest who came to visit.” Greeted a tall creature who came out from nowhere.
            
Surprised, Febri tried to stand on his feet again but he was still trembling because of his fear and exhaustion. After collecting all his nerve, he could stand up and begun to speak.
            
“Greetings spirit, I come here in peace and I am here to fulfill your call.”
            
“I see, you are the one who destined to help us here. Please have a seat.”
            
“Thank you very much.” Said Febri then he reached to a nearby rock.
            
“You look so exhausted, how about a sip of tasty water from our fountain.”
            
“Yes, please. But, why you called me here?”
            
The spirit told everything it knew to Febri. Like how can this place was made and why they needed Febri’s assistance. The spirit give his second offer to Febri, but once again, Febri tried to distract it to another conversation. The spirit had its own strategy, it said that the pool is actually The Fountain of The Youth which could heal any wound and make someone live longer than any normal human. Still, it couldn’t make Febri lose his mind.
            
Atleast, it was now the turn for Febri to wait for the third offer from the host. The spirit intentionally made the place hotter than before. Febri was also forced to tell about how could he be friend with the wind spirit. Febri endure his thirst, giving all his efforts to passed the last test. He showed the politeness and manners like how the Javanese people did.
            
“Human kid, I love the way you talked and the manner you showed me.” said the creature.
            
“As a present, I will let you go home safely.”
            
“Thank you very much, I will tell the emperor about what we have discussed before. Then I will be leaving.” said Febri heavily.
            
“Wait! Since I have guarantee your safety, you should go through this way.”
            
The creature pointed his finger out from his white robe to the pool, leaving Febri to be confused. As he approached the pool, he was really shocked. The shallow pool he saw before changed into a bottomless water hole and now he should dive into there.
            
“Don’t worry, you will be safe. Ah, please give this to the emperor. It is a crystallized version of The Water of Youth. It will help you to prove yourself to the emperor. Now go! Hurry!”
            
The creature pushed Febri down into the pool and he drowned in the cold and dark blue water at no time. After some seconds drowned in the pool, Febri finally realized that he was drowned in The Water of Youth. The water was so light, so we could still breath even after the water entered our lungs. Febri let his body keep falling to the the bottom of the hole and wait for what would happen.
           
 “A light?”
            
*tluck...tlock*
            
Febri opened his eyes, he suprised that he woke up in the bottom of a shallow lake. The water was heavy, it was different than before. The boy found himself nearly out of breath. In a flash, he reached the surface.
            
“Pwuaah!”
            
“Where am I?”
            
It was dark and cold, Febri hardly tried to remember the place. Then he realized that it was the karst lake that he just found this morning. He walked to the bank and he felt something was different. He didn’t feel the pain from his leg again and his body felt so light. Something changed inside him.
            
“Febri!! Where are you?” yelled someone from afar.
            
“I am here guys!”
            
“What the heck? Febri?! Yoga! Febri is at the karst lake!”
            
“What?!”
            
A light flashed to Febri. It was his friends who have searched for him in the hill. The three atleast could be gathered again.
            
“You said you want to do birdwatching?”
            
“Yes, I am. But, it suddenly feel so hot and I want to swim in here! Hahaha!”
            
“For God’s sake! Let’s go to my house right now! You will catch a cold if you are staying like this!” said the tall boy.

"Thank you guys." said Febri. For this time, they were truly headed home together.

*****
            
Seven years have passed after the last time the boy visited the hill and now he could visited the hill again. The hill never changed from before like the boy himself was not changing into an older look even though his body became taller. His heart told him something. Maybe he would try to explore the hill and find new things again.


THE END!

Selasa, 29 Desember 2015

Writing Task 8 : Sending E-Mail to Overseas Friend

The last but not least post for Writing course's assignment guys, so get ready!
It is about sending e-mail to someone from other countries. Having friends from other countries could be the most amazing thing that ever happened to you. You can talk about something you interested for, discuss the diversity between our culture and theirs, or asking about how they spent their holiday in their country.

I got a new friend here, the name is Cici. She is a Chinese college student. I know her from penpalworld.com. It is kinda awkward since I never sent any e-mail to someone for a long time. Eventually, we have the same interest to animated movies or serial animation from Japan. Since we are just a friend, I used informal phrases to e-mail her. Here is our conversation :







Jumat, 25 Desember 2015

Writing Task 7 : Summarizing part 2

                The Lost Colony

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            The English were not the first Europeans to land their ships on American soil. The Vikings had discovered North America in the 11th century. Columbus landed in the Bahamas in 1492 for Spain, and the French began expeditions to the New World in 1524. But the first English presence in North America is important because the thirteen English colonies that would later be established eventually became the country now known as the United States of America.
Summary :
The first English presence in North America is important because the thirteen English colonies established North America to USA.

          In April of 1585 Sir Walter Raleigh, under the authority of Queen Elizabeth of England, sent an expedition of seven ships carrying 600 men, half of them soldiers, to found an English colony in North America. The colony was to be used to establish an English presence in the New World as well as a base from which English privateers, or pirates, could attack and plunder Spanish treasure fleets. Raleigh’s cousin, Sir Richard Grenville, led the expedition. 
Summary : 
In April 1585, Sir Walter Raleigh sent an expedition, led by Sir Richard Grenville, to find an English colony in North America.

                       In July of that year the bulk of the fleet reached a small island off the coast of Virginia that was called Roanoke. After building a small fort on the north side of the island, the colonists initiated relations with a Native American tribe that lived on the island, the Aquascogoc. These natives showed little interest in building relations with the English colonists, and they soon parted company. After this encounter, however, the English noticed that one of their silver cups had gone missing, and they attributed its disappearance to the Aquascogoc. Grenville, the English captain, was furious. He believed that the Aquascogoc had stolen the silver cup. Whether or not this was true, angry exchanges followed and soon the English burned the Aquascogoc village. The English held their fort against the subsequent attacks of the natives.
Summary :
In July 1585, the English expedition reached Roanoke island, Virginia. They initiated relation with a Native American tribe, the Aquascogoc, but burned the Aquascogoc village after they lost one of their silver cup.

                     Despite their success in battle, the colonists had a miserable time because they were mainly soldiers and adventurers, not farmers. They were hungry. They missed the comforts of England, such as soft feather beds and dainty foods. Also they had expected to find gold and silver on the island, and were disappointed when they found none. Grenville soon tired of these conditions and set out on his ship to plunder Spanish treasure fleets and return to England. The colony was gradually abandoned. 
Summary :
Sir Richard decided to plunder Spanish treasure fleets and abandoned the colony because the English could no longer survive in the island.

                    In 1587 Sir Walter Raleigh dispatched a further expedition of three ships and 150 colonists, led by John White, to Roanoke. This time the expedition included women and children, including White’s pregnant daughter, Elenora. Shortly after they reached Roanoke, Elenora delivered a child whom they named Virginia. Virginia was the first English person born in America. But the English soon ran into more trouble with the Native Americans. A colonist named George Howe was killed by natives while searching for crabs alone on the beach. The colonists were scared. They persuaded White to sail back to England to ask Sir Walter Raleigh for help. White left behind 114 colonists, including his daughter Elenora and granddaughter Virginia.
Summary :
In 1587, Sir Walter Raleigh dispatched a further expedition led by John White but eventually White have to left his colonists because he needs to ask Sir Walter Raleigh for help.

                   Unfortunately for White and the colonists, England was preparing for a naval war with Spain. All shipping from English ports was ceased. It took White three years to get his relief expedition back to Roanoke. When he returned in August of 1590, White found no sign of his daughter, granddaughter, or anyone else. They found three letters, “CRO,” carved on a tree and the full word, “CROATOAN,” on a nearby post. Possibly this referred to the Croatoan Island, which was nearby. White searched long and anxiously, but failed to find them.
Summary : 
England was preparing for a naval war with Spain so it took 3 years for White to get his relief expedition. When he returned, he found no sign of his colony except three letters, “CRO” carved on a tree and word “CROATOAN” on a nearby post.

                     No further trace of the lost colony has ever been found. Sir Walter Raleigh himself searched for the colonists in 1595, and he sent another search-party in 1602, but nothing came of either attempt. To this day no one knows for certain what happened to the colonists.  
Summary :
Two search-party has been sent to search the lost colony but it has ever been found and no one knows what happened to the colonists until today.

Minggu, 20 Desember 2015

Book Report : Our Mutual Friend

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Author                         : Charles Dickens
Publisher                     : Dian Rakyat, 1995
Publication Date         : Serialized 1864–5; book form 1865
Genre                          : Novel

            Taking place in England at 19th century, the story begins when John Harmon is came back to his hometown in order to fulfill his father’s last will. Old John Harmon had made a very strange will. He would give all his money to his son, John, but only if he agreed to marry a girl called Bella Wilfer. Unfortunately, John Harmon is thought to have been murdered soon after he left his ship. Jesse Hexam and his daughter, Lizzie, find a dead body in the Thames River that later on is identified as Harmon’s.

            Soon after the news spread, a pale-faced man named Julius Handford comes to look at the dead body then disappears into the dark street after he saw it. After John Harmon’s dead, the two servants of Harmon’s family, Noddy Boffin and his wife inherit the property. Mr. Boffin found that money can make a lot of trouble to him and his wife, so he decide to apply a mysterious man named John Rokesmith as their secretary.

            Mr. Boffin and his wife enjoy their new wealth and leisure, but they regret that the only son of old Harmon didn’t live to enjoy the fortune that actually should be his. So the Boffins invite Bella Wilfer to live with them in their grand new house, wishing to provide her with the kind of life she might have had as John Harmon’s wife. But later on, money have spoilt Bella and makes her think that money is everything she needs.

            In the other hand, after the lost of her father, Lizzie Hexam works for Jenny Wren, the Dolls’ Dressmaker. Eventually, Lizzie becomes good friend with Jenny because she likes to help Jenny and never been bothered with Jenny’s disabilities. Everything is smooth for Lizzie until her brother, Charley Hexam and his schoolmaster, Bradley Headstone visit her. That meeting has made Bradley fall in love with Lizzie. But there is another person who loves Lizzie, he is Eugene Wrayburn, a lawyer. So there are two gentlemen who fall in love with Lizzie Hexam. However, Headstone’s affection scares Lizzie then she flees to another area.

            Maybe you’re wandering now, who is the main character? If it is John Harmon, why he died in the beginning? Well, the good news is he is not died. The one who died is his imposter, George Radfoot. After the fake John Harmon pronounced to be dead, the real John Harmon disguise himself as Julius Handford, then as John Rokesmith to find out what kind of girl Bella Wilfer was. And then he works for the Boffins as their secretary.

            While working for the Boffins, John has some opportunities to talk with Bella Wilfer. And one day, John proposed Bella but Bella rejects him with disdain. Day by day, Mr. Boffin begun to get more miserly, but this is all part of a charade to show Bella Wilfer that money is not everything. When Mr. Boffin tries to discharge John Rokesmith, Bella has stand for Rokesmith’s side. Bella has become wiser, having seen how money and wealth have changed Mr. Boffin into an ill-tempered old man. She refuses to stay any longer with the Boffins and returns to her father. Then Bella marries Rokesmith because she loves him, and he eventually reveals that he is John Harmon.

            By the end of the book, all the bad guys are punished and the good guys are rewarded. Mr. Headstone drown in a river with Mr. Riderhood. Charley Hexam continues his study to make a better life. John Harmon and Bella Wilfer move into a fancy house in London and takes the Boffins as their loyal servants. Eugene Wrayburn marries Lizzie Hexam and he starts to recover from his wound.

            This is a wonderful book to read. This books is very classic when the bad guys are getting the ‘Sad Ending’ and the good guys are getting the ‘Happy Ending’. It is an excitement to see every characters’ efforts to get a better life. This book tries to tell us that money is not everything. Money can’t buy happiness, happiness can only be found if your heart feels warm and comfy when you see or do something. I am truly recommend this book for your teatime companion.

This is my favorite quote, when Bella finally understand the situation :
“I think I understand now, why you were always talking about money. You saw me becoming greedy and hard. So you pretended to be greedy and hard too, just to show me what it was like.”

Selasa, 24 November 2015

Writing Task 7 : Summarizing part 1

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The Challenger Disaster by Mary Jones

            By 1984, NASA, the United States space program, had carried out many successful flights of the space shuttle.  In fact, Americans were beginning to take the whole NASA program for granted.  Then, the president announced that the next shuttle would carry a school teacher into space.  Hundreds of teachers from all parts of the country applied for the job.  They all wanted to be “the first teacher in space.”  During the next year, these adventurous educators were tested and examined and trained.  At last, the choice was announced.  A teacher from New Hampshire, Christa MacAuliffe, would be the first teacher-astronaut.

Summary:  Christia MacAuliffe would be the first teacher carried into space by NASA.

            Many months of preparation and training followed the announcement.  First, Christa went through intensive physical training.  She had to be in top condition for the flight.  Then she learned how to operate some of the delicate instruments on the Challenger space shuttle.  Christa planned special lesions, which she would teach from space.  Finally, she trained with the astronauts, so they could work as a team in space.

Summary : Christia prepared herself to be ready for the flight to space with other
                    Challenger crew.

            Everyone knows what happened on that terrible day in January, 1986.  Early in the morning, the Challenger crew had a good breakfast and discussed their plans.  They made sure they understood all of the work they would be doing during the flight.  Later, they boarded a special  van, which carried them to the shuttle.  The weather was rather cold, and some NASA officials wondered if they should put off the flight.  After some discussion, they decided to go ahead.  The Challenger took off over the Atlantic Ocean in Florida.  Minutes later, it exploded in the air.  All the crew members died in the crash.

Summary : At 1986, the Challenger accident happened and killed all its crew members.


Selasa, 03 November 2015

Movie Review : Assassination Classroom (Ansatsu Kyoushitsu) Live Action


Have you ever thinking to kill your homeroom teacher back then? Maybe this crazy fantasy flashed at least once in every junior high schooler's head. But, how about you got to kill your homeroom teacher to save the world? This movie brings up your crazy fantasy into real!

The story begins in 3-E class where the worst third year students of Kunugigaoka Junior High school been gathered. There, a yellow octopus-like creature suddenly shows up as their homeroom teacher. For your information, this yellow being with a smiley-face emoticon for a head is incredibly strong and fast and he is going to destroy the earth in one year unless someone can stop him. In effort to make things not one-sided, he makes a deal with the governments to teach 3-E class students and not kill them until they graduate. Because the army can do nothing about it, the government of Japan assigns the students of class E with a secret mission to assassinate the yellow creature known as Koro-sensei (from korosenai = unkillable and sensei = teacher).

As you can expect from a manga-to-movie adaptation, this movie compress about 75 manga chapters, or one full anime season, into 110 minutes. Due to this, most of the character introduction is skimmed over and only focused on the major characters. Some settings also have been changed and are different from the manga.

About the casting, this movie took an advantage by lining the cast with current Japan teens idols. The movie gave us almost the same character's psychological side but changed the character in more realistic looks.


The movie protagonist, Nagisa Shiota is played by Ryosuke Yamada. Although Yamada can draw more attention from the female audience, he actually acting differently compared to the original Nagisa from the manga. Here, Nagisa looks timid, innocent, and observant. In the original source, Nagisa's look is tightly connected with his background story. If there is a sequel, I like to see how they overcome this if they do.


The genius but violent character, Karma Akabane is played by Masaki Suda. Suda played well as the devilish Karma with his haughty character.


The class' sexy Russian assassin / English teacher, Irina Jelavic is played by Kang Ji-Young. Kang does a good job as the seductive temptress.


The most impressive is Anarashi Kazumiya as the mischievous but endearing Koro-sensei. With his talented vocal acting skills, Ninomiya brings this mischievous but endearing Koro-sensei to life through his iconic but crispy chuckle and wise advice.

I am really enjoying this movie. It is fun to watch the humor and got hit with its serious drama. The action scenes are not bad after all. The film director, Eiichiro Hasumi tried his best to hit as many plot points and stick close to the source material. Every scenes that involve Koro-sensei are entertaining, especially when he gives his iconic laughter. There are also moral values too like respecting each other, we can be better than other people thought about us, etc.

In the scale of 1 to 5, I will give this movie 3,4! Let's see what's other people think about this movie :

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